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TNG Novel ENGINES OF DESTINY Doesn't Quite Hit the Mark

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By BWilliams / 07:35, 29 March 2005 / Reviews - Books

Imagine the worst horror you could imagine occurring to you. Imagine watching your commanding officer and friend inexplicably die, then imagine being thrust into a time where you're seen as an outdated relic in everyone's way. That's exactly what happened with Montgomery Scott, as he continues to deal with the loss of James T. Kirk toward the end of the 23rd century and his own reappearance nearly a century later in the events of the NEXT GENERATION episode "Relics". But in the new novel ENGINES OF DESTINY, writer Gene DeWeese, author of CHAIN OF ATTACK and THE FINAL NEXUS, puts Scotty at the front and center of a most ambitious mission, one fans have wanted to see for the past decade: the rescue of Captain Kirk from the jaws of death.

DeWeese has a great premise in hand, as Scotty, Jean-Luc Picard, and the Enterprise-D crew are thrust back 75 years in time prior to Kirk's death aboard the Enterprise-B, as Scotty makes a daring rescue attempt in saving Kirk's life. But what they find is a galaxy in turmoil and under attack from its most fearsome enemy ever: the Borg, who have assimilated all of the worlds of the Federation. Nothing is recognizable in this alternate universe, and only a handful of races are united together in an alliance against the Borg's assault on the Alpha Quadrant. There is no Federation, no Enterprise-B, no Earth to return home to, only the unstoppable threat of the Borg. DeWeese has fun here in this alternate universe, giving us glimpses into alternate versions of some of our favorite characters, especially Sarek, who in this universe is the Supreme Arbiter of the Alliance. His flashes of what could be another life affects his judgment and his leadership of the Alliance. Even the alternate univere's version of Guinan is, well, Guinan. And in this universe, everyone is certain that this is the one, true universe that exists.

DeWeese also portrays Scotty as a driven, tortured man obsessed with a singular goal, the rescue of his long-time captain and friend, at the cost of the entire universe. But as STAR TREK has been wont to portray over the years, is the life of one man worth risking the entire universe for? DeWeese shows us that it's not, and with horrific results. Much like the Original Series episode "The City on the Edge of Forever", DeWeese reveals that the opposite must be true in order for everything to be as it should be. It's a heavy price to pay, to be sure, but it's a redemptive decision only Scotty can make, and in this aspect ENGINES OF DESTINY succeeds.

However, as has been the case with his past novels, DeWeese's reliance upon description over dialogue to drive the action forward is heavily evident. We want to know what the characters think, say, and feel, but at times the lack of dialogue robs ENGINES OF DESTINY of that little something extra to push it forward. There has to be a balance between description and dialogue in any novel, to be sure, but it's not as evident in DeWeese's works as it is in other novels, both STAR TREK and in general. And when the last line of dialogue appears ten pages before the end of the novel, you know it's a sure sign that it needs to be punched up a bit.

Another problem I had with ENGINES OF DESTINY is the case of dangling plot threads. DeWeese never fully expands upon the thought of when the problem with the Borg's infiltration of the Alpha Quadrant actually began. While he manages to get close to the subject, he never seems to address it in the overall context. However, he does manage to tie the novel in to future hints of what we saw occur in FIRST CONTACT, so perhaps his thread is a precursor to what eventually happens in the feature film. Still, though, it would have been nice if he had brought the thread to closure.

When I first read CHAIN OF ATTACK and THE FINAL NEXUS, I found them to be extremely dry and devoid of much dialog, making them often boring and static. Of course, my own reading tastes have changed over the past 18 years, and while I enjoyed ENGINES OF DESTINY, I found myself wishing once again that Gene DeWeese had given the dialog that little added punch to have made this book a complete winner hands-down. It's a fairly good story, otherwise, with an entertaining premise, one that could have benefited with a little more clarification and dialogue overall.



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By: Maverick128 (Odo's file, contact) @ 12:12:18 on Mar 29, 2005

The problem with the whole "Enterprise crew not being there to follow the Borg back in time and save 21st century Earth" is that the Borg probably wouldn't have had to go into the past. Picard wasn't there to know the cube's weak point and therefore the cube probably wouldn't have been destroyed. Instead of going into the past they would just assimilate Earth then and there. Therefore this Borg filled past wouldn't have happened.

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By: StillKirok (Odo's file, contact) @ 12:34:03 on Mar 29, 2005

It's amazing how they don't realize that Kirk can't return in some lame reset story that just has him remain dead. Without Kirk being alive at the end of the story, there's no point to it.

I had no interest in this book because of that.

Having read the review, I have less interest.

Besides, if Scotty was going to use time travel, why not just beam Kirk out when the bridge is falling on Veridian III?

At that point, Soran is stopped. The E-D still has crashed. So there is no reason the events of FC can't go on as usual. And to make it better, the Federation has the finest captain in its history back ready to kick some butt in another era.

But in this story, you know they aren't going to KEEP Kirk alive. So there's no point to it.

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RE: I Briefly Discussed This Book by Terry212 @ 12:51:25 on Mar 29
    RE: I Briefly Discussed This Book by BringBackKirk @ 17:58:08 on Mar 29
       RE: I Briefly Discussed This Book by Terry212 @ 05:43:49 on Mar 30
          RE: I Briefly Discussed This Book by BringBackKirk @ 16:32:03 on Mar 30

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By: Terry212 (Odo's file, contact, web site) @ 10:16:10 on Mar 29, 2005

WARNING: BOOK SPOILERS!!

I thought the book was decent light reading. Very astute! Scotty does not convince Picard to help him....Scotty keeps his plan secret, and Picard tries to stop him when he figures out what's going on.

The book is decent light reading. The reviewer is correct, I guess, that the author doesn't EXACTLY state what causes the timeline shift. Shortly after the TNG-era episode "Relics," Scotty encounters a TOS-era Klingon warbird. He thinks back to Kirk dying in the Nexus, and feels guilty about letting it happen. He recalls taking a warbird back in time during ST4. He decides to take this warbird back to the time of Kirk dying. He uses a transporter to take Kirk off the Enterpirse B JUST prior to the bolt from the Nexus "killing" Kirk. That changes the timeline to a Borg-dominated one. Now, there are some references to Kirk's destiny in the Nexus and a few hints about First Contact. What I assume is this: Kirk didn't go to the Nexus. Kirk wasn't there to help Picard against Soran in Generations. Whether Picard leaves the Nexus is unknown, but recall that the ENT-D crew was killed in Generations before Kirk helped rectify that past. SO we can assume that Picard and crew never make it to Earth to follow the Borg into the past during the events of FIRST CONTACT. So...the Borg assimilate 21st Century Earth. Kind of interesting.

There are fun bits for fans. I didn't approve of all of it. For one thing, it makes the point that there are several Borg queens and that they can all operate independently. In my view, there is ONE Borg, organized through the Queen. One Queen. One hive mind.

Also, the writer establishes that Guinan was an UNUSUAL El_Aurian....that her pseudo-psychic abilites are peculiar to her rather than her whole species. I never assumed that. I always thought Guinan's sixth sense was a product of her species, not some weird mutation. This didn't come from canon, just from assumption. I just prefer my view to the author's, that's all. Also, I don't think Kirk was written very well. His dialogue didn't sound like something I could hear Kirk/Shatner saying. Everyone else was written well enough.

One other thing...everyone had visions from their alternate future and alternate past. Why??? I guess because the timeline was unstable...but that's never happened in any timetravel story before. I guess the Nexus being involved makes things different but I think it's weird.

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RE: I Briefly Discussed This Book by StillKirok @ 12:44:49 on Mar 29
    Thanks For All Your Input by Jean-Luc @ 16:21:20 on Mar 29
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