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Deus Unabashedly Impressed? "Proving Ground" a Success Indeed

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By O. Deus / 07:56, 23 January 2004 / ENTERPRISE Reviews

Reviews Ex Deus

Title: "Proving Ground"

Overall: 8.5
Performances: 8
Writing: 8.5
Direction: 7
FX & Prod Value: 7.5


Synopsis: Archer finds dubious Andorian allies in his quest to stop the Xindi weapon.

Review: Proving Ground may very well stand as the best Xindi arc episode to date, not because like "Twilight" it does something extraordinary. Instead it stands out because it has the qualities that should be commonplace in ENTERPRISE episodes but sadly haven't been.

"Proving Ground" manages to be a suspenseful episode because the suspense doesn't come out of staged threats or characters behaving like idiots for the convenience of the plot, but out of the interactions of the agendas of well-rounded and written characters. All out of a story that finally gets the season back on track with the Xindi arc instead of wandering around aimlessly through various distractions. And most of all, a story that brings back the sense of imminent danger to humanity that we haven't really seen since "Twilight" and probably the end of last season before that.

Chris Black writing on his own for once manages to inject life into even the most mundane scenes with snappy and witty dialogue that actually develops the characters. We even have a meaningful scene dealing with Trip's sister, one of the first real growth scenes this season that have so far reduced his grieving process to a series of erotic massages from T'Pol, with of all people, Shran. Bakula comes off as a bit stiff and irritable but Jeffrey Combs manages to make the most out of every second of his screen time. This is unquestionably his best performance as Shran; the conflict between his liking for humans and his duty to the Imperial Guard makes the Shran character fully multi-dimensional as he moves seamlessly from comedy to tragedy.

But even the more minor scenes and characters get their due. The interaction between Lt. Talas and Lt. Reed is fun to watch but it also develops her sufficiently enough to make her actions in transmitting the probe data to the Enterprise credible. The tension within the Xindi High Council is tighter and more explosive than ever. So tightly wound that an explosion between the moderate and extreme Xindi seems all but inevitable. And all the while Shran has now been developed into something like Archer's Q, a nemesis of sorts who nevertheless respects the Captain even if he more often acts as an obstacle.

On the directing side, veteran STAR TREK director David Livingston turns in another professional effort. The episode under him plays out like a heist movie with quick sharp scenes that focus on the essentials and don't waste time on anything else. Suspense builds slowly but surely and unlike "Chosen Realm" is never squandered with an easy resolution but instead builds to the final confrontation between Archer and Shran that almost has a touch of WRATH OF KHAN to it. And for once Archer doesn't defeat an opponent through heroics or technobabble or luck; but by out-thinking him and ultimately out-bluffing him.

The Andorian sets themselves lit with blue are a nice touch and somewhat reminiscent of the Enterprise-D sets suggesting that maybe the Andorians had more to do with the visual decor of Starfleet than humans did. The Andorian visual communications have an oddly faded 60's touch very reminiscent of STAR TREK's Original Series look. The Andorian Starship may not look like it would be believeable on TOS but the Andorian General looking out from that circular screen looks as if he would be very much at home talking to Captain Kirk over it. The contrasts between the three sets of command bridges, Xindi, Human and Andorian help give the episode a grand scope visually that can't simply be done with CGI starships. Playing out the same scene while moving from the perspective three locales builds up the suspense nicely.

Meanwhile the Xindi story has now been significantly advanced with Enterprise scoring its first real victory over the Xindi. The data losses of last week have been partially recovered, though this incident suggests Enterprise needs better data backup protection. And with data on the probe and a prototype destroyed, Enterprise now has given Earth a fighting chance against the coming Xindi assault. And ENTERPRISE, the series, has produced what may well be the best episode of the Xindi. Certainly the best at progressing the story, at showing life-like characters interacting with each other and at delivering a suspenseful and entertaining story that's worth every minute.



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By: Hbasm (Odo's file, contact, web site) @ 10:47:05 on Jan 28, 2004

1) Very good episode.

2) Still the Xindi bickering lacks substance. They are just yelling at each other with short sentences, much like barking dogs. Only Degra seems intelligent.

3) Archer's yelling doesn't work. It's overdone. Bakula surely gives it all the power he can, but it sounds forced (and hurt my ears!). If the words are worth saying, they don't need to be shouted.


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By: Klytus (Odo's file, contact) @ 22:09:19 on Jan 26, 2004

O.Deus and I are in complete agreement. This episode is one of the top five episodes of this season which automatically makes it one of best episodes for the Enterprise franchise. Any Star Trek episode with Jeffrey Combs in it is always better. The rest of the cast of Enterprise have to do their collective best to keep him from stealing every scene he's in!


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By: NAFF (Odo's file, contact) @ 21:13:17 on Jan 25, 2004

This was a mediocre effort, yet still better than most of the steaming crap usually served-up by this show.

A wafer thin plot with such an obvious twist it was untrue.

Cringe-worthy acting from Bakula and the ponce who plays Reed.

Yet, I was transfixed at the Andorian antenna for the whole hour. Just how are they done? CGI, animatronics? How ever they are done they deserve a show more than this current cast.


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By: Toroca (Odo's file, contact) @ 22:18:53 on Jan 24, 2004

I would have said Tuesday as well, prior to the return of the ratings powerhouse that is American Idol. That show hurts EVERY network, and if Fox follows it's pattern from last year, it will air on Tuesday and Wednesday each week, with occasional specials on Monday. Which then, is why I suggested Thursday. There isn't any major competition for ratings on Thursday except for NBC's lineup, and as I suggested, I don't think the Friends crowd is quite the same as the audience Enterprise is looking for. And Friday kills the ratings of otherwise good shows, so I don't think it would be helpful either. With the show's rating already so low, I don't know that it would hurt, but it certainly wouldn't help. No, a careful examination of what's on which night leads me to conclude that Enterprise would have the best chance if UPN swapped their Thursday and Wednesday schedules.


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RE: No Argument Here by Toroca @ 22:33:20 on Jan 24
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By: lemmiwinks (Odo's file, contact) @ 17:22:47 on Jan 23, 2004

Once again, Coombs dazzles us. I bet I'm not the only one who had a permanent grin plastered on their face throughout this episode. He just needs a regular role on the series. Weyoun was on just about every DS9 episode after the war began. With a probable Federation Formation arc just over the horizon, and an alien race (which is now my favorite) that hasn't been touched on since TOS, there's the perfect opportunity to really break some ground. And unlike some recurring characters, you can watch Jeffrey on a fairly regular basis and he just keeps bringing more to the table.

On top of not having any lines, I don't even know if Mayweather even had any camera time this ep. I hardly notice him anymore. He's almost become a fixture, like Morn. He might as well be sitting at a barstool instead of the helm.

Quick question... do we know if it was Shran or his Lieutenant who secretly transmitted the schematics?

Who would have thought that the little green... er... blue men would turn out to be so interesting? Especially on Star Trek!


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RE: The Andorian Mining Consortium runs from no one... by Burst @ 13:48:42 on Jan 26
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By: Captain Chris (Odo's file, contact) @ 14:17:51 on Jan 23, 2004

Some things you missed that really put this over the top:

The tension between T'Pol and Shran was very real, not manufactured with silly soap opera dialogue. Did anyone notice that Shran rarely, if ever, spoke directly to T'Pol? In fact he almost always had his back to her! Good directing.

There were also distinct motivations from all species that hinted at deeper story lines, again without dialogue contortions.

In addition to bringing the Xindi arc one step closer to closure, this ep also laid some more ground work for the formation of the Federation. Probably more than all of Season 2.

Great job!


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RE: The subtleties by O. Deus @ 15:30:27 on Jan 23
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By: Steve Krutzler (Odo's file, contact) @ 10:16:01 on Jan 23, 2004

The antennae reveal when Shran first contacted Archer? VERY well done. They need to do some more visual touches like that in the future. Read my overall comments here .

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RE: And didn't you just love by Jadzia-Dax @ 14:59:01 on Jan 23
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       RE: And didn't you just love by Steve Krutzler @ 17:58:10 on Jan 23
    RE: And didn't you just love by Mattman65 @ 12:11:33 on Jan 23
       RE: And didn't you just love by Aeon @ 17:36:12 on Jan 23

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By: Edzo (Odo's file, contact) @ 10:11:22 on Jan 23, 2004

I loved "Proving Ground." It was great having the Andorians back again and learning a little more about them.

And about Shran, too. Assuming the story about his brother was true, it was a great character moment. Jeffrey Combs still rocks. His "assumed" personality when he was talking to Degra was really funny.

Given the enormousness of the Expanse, it was a bit of a stretch believing that the Andorians could locate Enterprise, but no matter. I'm used to "stretches" in Star Trek.

My one disappointment? I wish there'd been an epilogue about the Xindi Council's reaction to Degra losing the prototype. Guess we'll have to wait for that explosive conversation.

Too bad they didn't save this episode for February sweeps. That must mean they have some kick-ass shows waiting to air (one can only hope).

Good job, B&B! This was a great, entertaining hour!

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By: Jadzia-Dax (Odo's file, contact) @ 09:40:29 on Jan 23, 2004

I would agree about the direction and would really underscore the editing. Yes, there was that epic-like feel, particularly during the prototype test scene, with the POV shifting around the various ships, etc. And even within the various POVs, there was a unique overhead perspective of the Andorian ship, the inside-looking-out water perspective for the Xindi-Aquatics, several scenes showing groups of Xindi-Humanoid workers all monitoring their equipment, etc. I would say that this was probably the most Xindi, of all the types, that we have ever seen in one ep. LOL

The imagery that came to mind was that the ep was like a train roaring down a track, with everything progressing forwards to an initial climax (the Xindi test and realization that the prototype most likely WAS sabotaged by Gralik). And then similar to a roller coaster, progressing through a small dip, only to make that final big push to an even higher climax representing the double-cross of Shran and the bluff (or was it?) of Archer, near the end.

I don't think any other ep comes close in progressing a story along (at least from a threat level perspective) except ENT "Silent Enemy".

The one weakness that stands out, is that I feel more attachment to Shran than to any of the primary NX-01 crew. Now I don't know if that is partly because Jeffrey Combs (and his acting style) is so familar when compared to the primary cast, or whether the primaries are just so inconsistent that I can't even predict what they might do next and so have lost any connection that I originally had to them.

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These are the trips of the Star Trek Enterprise.

Its 5-year plan...

Calls for us to seek out new life and new civilizations.

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Shran had an emotional conflict for us to empathize with by O. Deus @ 13:16:13 on Jan 23
    RE: Shran had an emotional conflict for us to empathize with by Jadzia-Dax @ 15:17:53 on Jan 23
       RE: Shran had an emotional conflict for us to empathize with by O. Deus @ 15:37:17 on Jan 23
          RE: Shran had an emotional conflict for us to empathize with by Jadzia-Dax @ 15:12:57 on Jan 24
             RE: Shran had an emotional conflict for us to empathize with by O. Deus @ 21:34:01 on Jan 24
                RE: Shran had an emotional conflict for us to empathize with by Jadzia-Dax @ 21:56:58 on Jan 24
                   RE: Shran had an emotional conflict for us to empathize with by O. Deus @ 17:45:02 on Jan 25

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By: MarkMat (Odo's file, contact) @ 09:20:55 on Jan 23, 2004

Deus was right on with all of his comments. It was a great episode and I'm glad they're back on track with the Xindi arc.

HOWEVER,

UPN has stopped running a promo of the following week's show during the credits, even when it's a new episode. Anybody else notice that? Ladies and gentlemen, this is a VERY BAD sign about the future of this series, unfortunately. When you elect to run previews of a horrid reality show over a first-run episode of the show you just finished watching, then it's time to start preparing the resumes.

It's a shame because, from what I can tell, this is by far and away UPN's best property. They think their ratings are low now? Just watch what happens when there is no STAR TREK series. That may be Moonves grand design, anyway. Less competition.

Live long and prosper, Star Trek.


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Our Lifetime Network Presidents wants Top Model to be her legacy by O. Deus @ 13:25:14 on Jan 23
RE: Amen, brother by johniccp @ 12:46:15 on Jan 23
RE: Amen, brother by johniccp @ 12:46:04 on Jan 23
RE: Amen, brother by X-Drone1701 @ 11:38:35 on Jan 23

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By: Mattman65 (Odo's file, contact, web site) @ 09:03:45 on Jan 23, 2004

O.Deus liking an ENT episode!!!!

OMG...has hell frozen over...I'm running to my window to see if pigs can actually fly...etc, etc..

O.D. -- just having some fun, but honestly, I never thought I'd see the day you'ld write a review like that. I don't know if that says more about my expectations of ENT or you.

But, glad you liked it.



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RE: Deus liking an ENT episode... by O. Deus @ 13:22:33 on Jan 23

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By: Gaijin (Odo's file, contact) @ 08:56:25 on Jan 23, 2004

Great review Deus! I believe this might be the first time I agree fully with one of your reviews. But enough of that. You touched on all the best parts of the episode. Since I try and keep myself as spoiler-free as possible, I have no idea what the next episode will be about, but whatever it is, I'm looking really forward to it. It will also be my last episode in Japan, since I'm returning Feb. 8. Yay, I can finally start watching on TV again! But then again, downloading has no commecials :)

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RE: Entirely Correct by O. Deus @ 13:21:06 on Jan 23

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By: Toroca (Odo's file, contact) @ 08:44:33 on Jan 23, 2004 | Edit History (1)

I recently mentioned in a response to another article that I continue to watch Enterprise each week because I keep hoping for one of the series' rare standout episodes. Proving Ground was one of them. It was one of those few episodes in the series history that managed to break through the mediocrity that has beleagured the series and damaged the franchise.

Proving Ground was the kind of episode Enterprise needs to deliver consistently if Paramount wants Enterprise to survive its third season.

Basically, Enterprise now needs two things in order to survive. First and most importantly, it needs more well-written scripts like this one, backed by better acting than a typical Enterprise episode. And second, it needs a new night. It needs to air on a night when it doesn't have such strong competition. With the return of American Idol, Thursday or Friday would probably be best. I know I for one would most prefer Enterprise on Thursday, because there are no other shows that really compete for my attention on that night. NBC's lineup is strong on Thursday, but I don't think Friends and the like draw from the same audience pool as a sci-fi show like Enterprise, certainly not to the degree that a show like Smallville does.


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RE: No Argument Here by O. Deus @ 13:19:33 on Jan 23
RE: No Argument Here by Jadzia-Dax @ 09:15:09 on Jan 23
RE: No Argument Here by Gaijin @ 08:59:59 on Jan 23

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By: Weyune (Odo's file, contact) @ 08:37:05 on Jan 23, 2004

Finally O.D. and I agree with an episode. This must be only the 3rd or 4th time since the series started that we agree with an episode.

I loved it! Shran was fantastic. The writing was spectacular. The direction was pure class.

I can say nothing bad about this episode!

Dues summs it all up so nicely.

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